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I am told to fly
Higher and higher
Until I reach the Stars.

But, how can I
With these battered and
Broken wings[taped and glued]
That constantly fall apart
And shatter like glass.

Should I attempt to rebuild again?

I'll start with the bent, rusted
Nails and stripped screws
With duct tape.
Will you help me?[if it's not too much to ask]

I think this time there are
Too many pieces to pick up.

Maybe... someday... I'll grow new wings
And then I'll be able to fly higher
Than the stars... with you by my side.

Will you join me?[if it's not too much to ask
©2007-2009 ~dudethatscrazy
:icondudethatscrazy:

Author's Comments

I wrote this either at the end of December or early January. I can't remember.

I hope you like it. I think I could have done a little better with the structure of it, though.

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:icondont-regret-saturday:
well hey I like it!

you havent put much stuff on lately, so its good to see you're still writing!

--
That's what I'd say.
:iconskeletal-stars:
♥♥♥

--
even the angels desire to look upon these things.
:icondudethatscrazy:
=D

so what do you like about it?
:iconskeletal-stars:
i just like what it says. i think that it is something that a lot of people can relate to, ya know? it is honest and raw. you dont hold anything back. you know what you are trying to say and you say it.

--
even the angels desire to look upon these things.
:iconwendaline:
Hello long time no speak. i think its good the maybe someday bit reminded me of a nickleback song. So that tune kept coming into my head but it was good.
:icondudethatscrazy:
YAH! It has been quite a long time. I thought I would never see you again. Thank you!

-Justin

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